Welcome back, I'm glad to see that you've returned after the fiasco that was your last thread.
This song shows some legit improve and, overall, I feel it is a very solid track that I would use in a dance mix or something. Black Sun Empire had some great tunes back in the day (
Driving Insane was a great album). Are you still using FrootyLoops?
My CritiqueThe drums are pretty weak throughout, particularly your kicks. I'd tweak them to make them sound as menacing and explosive as the synth is.
Cool breakdown near the two minute mark and from 3:00-3:20 is great but turning up and fine tuning the volume on the drums would improve it.
It ends very abruptly, you have to find some sort of closer.
Overall, the synth is pretty nice but maybe a little repetetive.
Keep up the good work.
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