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Originally posted by hudson:
flat, boring, predictable.

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Originally posted by DANNY ARCHER®:
I listened to Reef Road. I liked the intro. Vocals were ok, but could be a lot better. I liked the instrumentals. It was in the style of an old Green Day song. (idk if that was a compliment or not)

But yeah. get back into it!

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Originally posted by Glass Eye:
The intro's in both do seem a bit long at first listen. They also have that cliche feel of when you ever go to write a song yourself & you know the chord progression in your head is kinda copying all the things you've heard before & expect.

But by the 3rd listen they sound fine. I was just talking about the intro's above, the pre-verse in Reef Road rocks & I prefer the singing in Favourite Trunks, chord progressions good too & there was a good drum fill about 3/4 way through.

I definetly think you should get back into it, the song-writing is above average but not quite pro. I also don't think your sound is that original. Most bands aren't but they seem to represent their influences in different proportions, creating their own space if you know what i mean, i don't think you've got that yet, it'd sound great live at club but not for an album.

also, is there meant to be no bass guitar or is it my computer speakers or that you don't know anyone who plays. Anyway work on the writing, I'm no-where near as good at it.