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Do you prefer wordy elaborate writing (as in Scott Fitzgerald, José Saramago and Claude Simon); or spare minimal writing (as in Carver, some Bukowski or John Barth) ????
 
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Strangely enough, I like sparely shot film (Ingmar Bergman) and elaborate writing (James Joyce).
 
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I prefer somewhere in the middle-to-elaborate range. I hate, HATE, spare writing.


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it seems to me that however an author writes is part of his or her style. Margaret Coel and Steven F. Havill write rather spare books but nothing is missing as far as plot and character development. To the other end, read Tolstoy and tell me you would eliminate any of those hundreds of delicious pages.
Good reading to you.


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Elaborate writing, as long as it's good. I find minimalist writing very cold and unemotional.
 
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I like both styles. Good writing is good writing, no matter what the style or content or genre or any of that limiting labelling rubbish.


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I recommend to all of you Orwell's essay on the state of the English language. It's pretty clear about his stance Smiler


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I admire writer's who waste no words yet still take me away with the plot or the topic.
Ed McBain wrote detective novels that were missing nothing, but they were maybe 180 pp or so. Then there was Tolstoy with his Anna Karenina and 650 pp or more. Neither author wrote with extraneous wordage.


"give me ambiguity or give me something else."
 
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Very well put rockthief. Smiler


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This is true.
It's also why J.K. Rowling is good, but not great. Obviously, she's doing something right to be richer than the queen of england, but these books don't need 1000 pages to advance the story. Honestly, her writing style isn't that great, but what she did is captivate everyone from the lowest common denominator all the way up to very intelligent people. I consider her books an entertaining diversion. Her books have tons of extraneous stuff, though. At least I think so.


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Couldn't agree more Sinister.

Hell, I'm just everyone's back up man, aren't I? Smiler

I picked up 'The Philosophers Stone' shortly after the second book had been released, and the hype was just beginning. I could sniff big sales for the gal, and so I thought I would take a dip, but it took me about four attempts to get past the first few pages. her writing style was, and remains pretty bad.

The goddamn last one was bloated beyond belief.


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Her style of writing is like nuclear power...fantastically popular, and you don't want to get any on you.


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the best thing about Rowling is that she inspired some many people in all age groups to read. That is quite the feat. Cheers on the lady!


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Yeah, and they read a lot. But I'm not sure that she gets taught in public elementary school as much as before.


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I'm hoping that JK is a "gateway" author. Hook 'em on Harry Potter, and the next thing you know, the kids are reading Conrad, and Tolkien and Dostoevsky. Sure, some of them might go overboard, and read DeLillo, or David Foster Wallace, but we have programs that can help them...


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From JK to Dostoevsky? That's a bit of a jump...


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The Brothers Hogwart
A Novel By J.K. Rowling

Harry, bent and shivering in his thin cowl turned and spoke in a harsh whisper, 'Ron, could it be that the Great Inquisitor is really Voldemort in disguise? Should we not berate ourselves for our sinful bodies, and spend some time in discussing the peasant situation of the lands surrounding Hogwarts?'

Ron, digging around in old black satchel, snapped, 'Arry? Shut your flippin' mouth and help me put some more invisible toads in 'Ermione's bed. Gor blimey.'


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That doesn't really sound much like Rowling. But it is hilarious Big Grin


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The Brothers Hogwart
A Novel By J.K. Rowling

Harry, bent and shivering in his thin cowl turned and spoke in a harsh whisper, 'Ron, could it be that the Great Inquisitor is really Voldemort in disguise? Should we not berate ourselves for our sinful bodies, and spend some time in discussing the peasant situation of the lands surrounding Hogwarts?'

Ron, digging around in old black satchel, snapped, 'Arry? Shut your flippin' mouth and help me put some more invisible toads in 'Ermione's bed. Gor blimey.'


Primo! You must enter this in some contest of some kind. Smiler


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Write a book called "The Brothers Hogwart" and substitute everything with Harry Potter life and lore, and win millions!


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